Don't you Dare Touch my Tail! | TGB Assignment

I adore that you've tried to draw a caiman- an animal that isn't common around DA , and you've done very well. I like when I see different things like this. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The 'dotty' brush used to shade the caiman in places gives a great scale definition, as does drawing a few of the scales as opposed to all of them. The ridges in the mouth are effective, and those jaws look deadly. You've done well anatomy-wise, I think. There is a lot of action in the image that gives great impact. The cat's very near miss with that caiman's jaws are quite thrilling, as are the silhouettes of the other battles taking place in the background; it's almost like full on caiman-cat war has broken out. The pose of the cat is great and also action-packed, and I love how the expression on the cat's face says the words of the title so well. The smudged effect on the fur details make them look like they're flowing with her fur, and it works well. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

To further improve this piece, I would suggest making the lineart of the glowing patterns lighter than the glow to give it extra luminescence. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> To illustrate what I mean, this 'GLOW!' sign's lines are lighter than the glow: www.hobbyglow.com/images/glow.… <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Overall, this is a lovely picture; keep up the good work. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>